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	<title>Comments on: Help! My Writing Needs a Doctor</title>
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		<title>By: uberVU - social comments</title>
		<link>http://www.blogussion.com/content-management/writing-help-doctor/comment-page-1/#comment-10317</link>
		<dc:creator>uberVU - social comments</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Nov 2009 19:37:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;strong&gt;Social comments and analytics for this post...&lt;/strong&gt;

This post was mentioned on Twitter by AlexFraiser: Help! My Writing Needs a Doctor! http://bit.ly/1Aq7Rh...</description>
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<p>This post was mentioned on Twitter by AlexFraiser: Help! My Writing Needs a Doctor! <a href="http://bit.ly/1Aq7Rh.." rel="nofollow">http://bit.ly/1Aq7Rh..</a>.</p>
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		<title>By: Alex Lim</title>
		<link>http://www.blogussion.com/content-management/writing-help-doctor/comment-page-1/#comment-8739</link>
		<dc:creator>Alex Lim</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Oct 2009 12:33:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I love to write, but then sometimes I tend to get lost of the main point of what I&#039;m really discussing about. To deal with it, I attended some conferences and listened to speakers as they deliver their thoughts. I built a habit of analyzing their speech structure as it is basically written in the first place. As I have ended with the idea like what is given in this post. They start with a theme and eventually have some kind of a review to emphasize the idea of what the listeners should pick up as a take away. I guess that’s the same with restating the main point. Thanks for this great reminder.
.-= Alex Lim´s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://alexliminc.com/before-you-purchase-a-domain-name-availability/&quot;&gt;Before You Purchase A Domain Name Availability&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div style=""><p>I love to write, but then sometimes I tend to get lost of the main point of what I&#8217;m really discussing about. To deal with it, I attended some conferences and listened to speakers as they deliver their thoughts. I built a habit of analyzing their speech structure as it is basically written in the first place. As I have ended with the idea like what is given in this post. They start with a theme and eventually have some kind of a review to emphasize the idea of what the listeners should pick up as a take away. I guess that’s the same with restating the main point. Thanks for this great reminder.<br />
.-= Alex Lim´s last blog ..<a href="http://alexliminc.com/before-you-purchase-a-domain-name-availability/">Before You Purchase A Domain Name Availability</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: KalibreOnline -Games, Life and Ent</title>
		<link>http://www.blogussion.com/content-management/writing-help-doctor/comment-page-1/#comment-8219</link>
		<dc:creator>KalibreOnline -Games, Life and Ent</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Sep 2009 12:39:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I liked the originality of it :D
.-= KalibreOnline -Games, Life and Ent´s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/Kalibreonline/~3/4qUibtJvbks/&quot;&gt;Muramasa: Beautiful Visuals mixed with great 2D action!&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div style=""><p>I liked the originality of it <img src='http://www.blogussion.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif' alt=':D' class='wp-smiley' /><br />
.-= KalibreOnline -Games, Life and Ent´s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/Kalibreonline/~3/4qUibtJvbks/">Muramasa: Beautiful Visuals mixed with great 2D action!</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Casey Brazeal (North and Clark)</title>
		<link>http://www.blogussion.com/content-management/writing-help-doctor/comment-page-1/#comment-7963</link>
		<dc:creator>Casey Brazeal (North and Clark)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Sep 2009 21:18:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>There are a lot of ways to medicate for a sick post.  My three favorite perscriptions are:

1. Beer
Step back, crack a beer, and loosen up a little.  That good thinking is in there just got to let it come out (note: there is a diminishing rate of returns on beer so don&#039;t get to drunk).
2. 5 Minutes
If you&#039;re frustrated take a break, do some push ups get away from the screen.  Five minutes can be enough time to change your whole outlook if you can really distract yourself from the writing and come back totally fresh.
3. A Buddy
Maybe another set of eyes can see what you keep missing.  Never be afraid to ask for help.

If there&#039;s one idea that runs through each of those ideas its figure out a way to change your out look.  We&#039;ve got to muffle our self censors and figure out a way to get the words to come out.  If that prescription doesn&#039;t work call me in the morning, or yell at me on twitter.  There&#039;s plenty more medicine where that came from.
.-= Casey Brazeal (North and Clark)´s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://northandclark.blogspot.com/2009/09/you-are-jazz-to-me.html&quot;&gt;You Are Jazz to Me&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div style=""><p>There are a lot of ways to medicate for a sick post.  My three favorite perscriptions are:</p>
<p>1. Beer<br />
Step back, crack a beer, and loosen up a little.  That good thinking is in there just got to let it come out (note: there is a diminishing rate of returns on beer so don&#8217;t get to drunk).<br />
2. 5 Minutes<br />
If you&#8217;re frustrated take a break, do some push ups get away from the screen.  Five minutes can be enough time to change your whole outlook if you can really distract yourself from the writing and come back totally fresh.<br />
3. A Buddy<br />
Maybe another set of eyes can see what you keep missing.  Never be afraid to ask for help.</p>
<p>If there&#8217;s one idea that runs through each of those ideas its figure out a way to change your out look.  We&#8217;ve got to muffle our self censors and figure out a way to get the words to come out.  If that prescription doesn&#8217;t work call me in the morning, or yell at me on twitter.  There&#8217;s plenty more medicine where that came from.<br />
.-= Casey Brazeal (North and Clark)´s last blog ..<a href="http://northandclark.blogspot.com/2009/09/you-are-jazz-to-me.html">You Are Jazz to Me</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Seth</title>
		<link>http://www.blogussion.com/content-management/writing-help-doctor/comment-page-1/#comment-7871</link>
		<dc:creator>Seth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Sep 2009 17:13:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well working on it is the only way to make it better, so keep on writing and reading about how to make it improve letter by letter.
.-= Seth´s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/blogussion/~3/G3QX8l6kNrM/&quot;&gt;The Power of Recycling Posts&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div style=""><p>Well working on it is the only way to make it better, so keep on writing and reading about how to make it improve letter by letter.<br />
.-= Seth´s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/blogussion/~3/G3QX8l6kNrM/">The Power of Recycling Posts</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Seth</title>
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		<dc:creator>Seth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Sep 2009 17:09:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>But without them, your readers sometimes miss the point.
.-= Seth´s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/blogussion/~3/G3QX8l6kNrM/&quot;&gt;The Power of Recycling Posts&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div style=""><p>But without them, your readers sometimes miss the point.<br />
.-= Seth´s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/blogussion/~3/G3QX8l6kNrM/">The Power of Recycling Posts</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Seth</title>
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		<dc:creator>Seth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Sep 2009 17:09:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Practice makes perfect and also prevents many of the sicknesses we get.  Excercise minimizes illness, and practice writing helps to minimize any problems with conclusions, introductions, or other writing elements.
.-= Seth´s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/blogussion/~3/G3QX8l6kNrM/&quot;&gt;The Power of Recycling Posts&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div style=""><p>Practice makes perfect and also prevents many of the sicknesses we get.  Excercise minimizes illness, and practice writing helps to minimize any problems with conclusions, introductions, or other writing elements.<br />
.-= Seth´s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/blogussion/~3/G3QX8l6kNrM/">The Power of Recycling Posts</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Seth</title>
		<link>http://www.blogussion.com/content-management/writing-help-doctor/comment-page-1/#comment-7868</link>
		<dc:creator>Seth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Sep 2009 17:05:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks... we really care about our readers because we know how important valuable information is to us, and try to provide it to you.  We also provide a summary because we know that sometimes you&#039;ve had a hard day.
.-= Seth´s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/blogussion/~3/G3QX8l6kNrM/&quot;&gt;The Power of Recycling Posts&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div style=""><p>Thanks&#8230; we really care about our readers because we know how important valuable information is to us, and try to provide it to you.  We also provide a summary because we know that sometimes you&#8217;ve had a hard day.<br />
.-= Seth´s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/blogussion/~3/G3QX8l6kNrM/">The Power of Recycling Posts</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Seth</title>
		<link>http://www.blogussion.com/content-management/writing-help-doctor/comment-page-1/#comment-7867</link>
		<dc:creator>Seth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Sep 2009 17:00:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Right! The most important thing is fixing your writing as quickly as possible. Regularly evaluating your writing style and your ability to clearly explain your message is important.  It&#039;s an emergency just like a broken leg.
.-= Seth´s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/blogussion/~3/G3QX8l6kNrM/&quot;&gt;The Power of Recycling Posts&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div style=""><p>Right! The most important thing is fixing your writing as quickly as possible. Regularly evaluating your writing style and your ability to clearly explain your message is important.  It&#8217;s an emergency just like a broken leg.<br />
.-= Seth´s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/blogussion/~3/G3QX8l6kNrM/">The Power of Recycling Posts</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Online shop hosting</title>
		<link>http://www.blogussion.com/content-management/writing-help-doctor/comment-page-1/#comment-7850</link>
		<dc:creator>Online shop hosting</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Sep 2009 20:40:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Amazing post, you linked sickness with blogging, however, introductions and conclusions can be the most difficult parts of articles to write, conclusion gives the essay a sense of completeness, and its leave a final impression on the reader.
.-= Online shop hosting´s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://www.hostingshop.co.uk/faq.php&quot;&gt;F.A.Q&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div style=""><p>Amazing post, you linked sickness with blogging, however, introductions and conclusions can be the most difficult parts of articles to write, conclusion gives the essay a sense of completeness, and its leave a final impression on the reader.<br />
.-= Online shop hosting´s last blog ..<a href="http://www.hostingshop.co.uk/faq.php">F.A.Q</a> =-.</p>
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